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Gems of Passion |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Eyes of passion Stare at me Emerald stones... Lips like garnet fire Whisper words smooth as pearls I see clouds... Amethyst puffs against a turquoise sky The day goes on We stay together In a world of our own At last, ebony skies fill the night As stars of diamonds emerge Topaz flickers from a campfire Mye eyes of sapphire show in the orange light I watch our love blossom like a ruby rose "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Did you go shopping at the jewelry store? I love this poem  |
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GodsPerfktAngel Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 28Ohio |
You have a very vibrant imagination,I hope you keep using it for your poetry!!!! Jocelyn M. Cosgray ~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Funny..yeah..shoplifting is much easier than taking a loan from the bank  HA HA Lakewalker! ROTFL! You try coming up with a poem that has every birthstone in it! I bet yours is in there somewhere...*analyzes poem* Thanks Angel, For your KIND reply! *glares at Lakewalker* LOL stay cool  ~~Lavada~~< !signature--> "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, I was being nice. I would try writing one, but it would never be as good as this  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
That's better You're cool Lakewalker   "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this was very interesting....i was losing hope of not finding my birthstone in there until i got to the end...yup my ruby! anyways excellant post...beautiful rainbow salooma |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very very beautiful! I love all the gems! And you even have my birthstone (Topaz) in it! Great work! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A piece of art this is; it's a 'jewel' sweetcollegegirl Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Quite touching, in deed, Lakewalker, you fool! you spoiled the feel of it all! kiddin, ur halerious, Uhm, all i can imagine is a lot of these stones and gems and stuff, the poem created a great picture, keep'em comin, they make me happy!! Love, Jeremy |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks all for the replies. I made sure I had all the gems in there, that way, evrybody was included! Jeremy: It's a deal! stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Loved it Vada!!! I'm the turquise sky!!! Yay i love it If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Well....it someone couldn't picture that one....they've got issues. You have such vivid descriptions... I'm impressed. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks to the both of you for replying! Tamma--Congrats! Jeremy: Thanks for the compliment stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Nice poem. It must have been hard to get all of the birthstones in there. PS: where do you go to college? |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks Jose, for the compliment. Yes, it was hard! I go to college in Arkansas...Why? "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
great job on this poem. great descriptions and a good scheme. keep up the great work. --JR "two roads diverged in a wood and I... I took the one less traveled by... ...And that has made all of the difference." --Robert Frost |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Thanks JR, for the compliment! Thanks all for replying! It means much to me! stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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