Teen Poetry #3 |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
I want to feel you around me Both of us tightly wrapped in each other's arms Nothing to come between us To love you all day and night To whisper tunes of romance in your ears To share all my life with you To share every thought with you These feelings always stay with me For we have become very close We will always meet And I'll always have these memmories You're so wonderful and mean so much to me You've become a part of me I try so hard to forget But always fail in every attempt I make Guess these feelings are not fake I let you free now to desire what you really want I hope that we meet again We'll let our love live and grow again Sincerely A_L |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i find a meaning here that i can't seem to put into words at this moment i'll tink on it and replie again but it is great work. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
I can identify with this poem so closely that it makes me want to cry. A good poem, I just wiched you'd picked a different subject to write on ( Love, Crystal Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks for your comments..Crystallina I'm not very creative...I'm trying to write to on different issues..just bear with me. Sincerely A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A_L~ this is a wonderful poem. I can relate very well and therefore it gives it more meaning to me.I hope that things work out. And you are creative...it comes from inside. One day, maybe when you're bored just sit and think...look to find your creativeness; I'm sure you'll find things about yourself you never even knew!! Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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