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BILLYtheKID New Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 1 |
unknown future unforgoten past stupid mistakes i just cant patch no turning back for its too late started"""no stoping this is my fate the look in my mothers eyes when i tell her i try the shame and rage would make others cry he grabs you wrist, tells you your fine one more shot another beer just take this sip of wine i say ok whats it going to do? make me feel thrown hey mabey i will have a few a few to many thats what it was when moma was driving or i think it was to the emergency room i had to much black charcle, all that throwing up i siad i am addicted forthe first time hey, my name is brian and i am jsut fine tough times never last tough people do |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
awsome poem.. BillytheKid!!! i really liked it!! im sorry about the past!! but at least you learned from your mistakes!! i hope that your all better now.... from your poem you sound just fine!! i had problems kinda related to that ... and i learned from them too!! i hope to see more great poems from you!! love always. Janette Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions and Teen #3  It's a great entrance you've made, this poem was great! I can't wait to read more! |
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lupigirl Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19Mequon, Wisconsin |
GREAT FIRST POST! I really enjoyed this read! Don't be down on yourself at all, though! God is on your side and he's there and willing to take your hand! Thanks for sharing this with us! You've helped to make someone's day a little brighter... SMILE!!"You've gotta SING like nobody's listening, DANCE like nobody's watching, and LOVE like it's never gonna hurt!!" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions BillytheKid! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow, and we invite you to join the family! This is an emotional and poignant first post. It is far too easy to get caught up in peer pressure and do something you might otherwise question. Lucky are those who can realize this fact early, and strongly say "no". I sense from your poem that you are taking steps to recover, and family and friends are there to support you. Keep your communications open! I wish you the best for your future, and hope to read more of your poetry and responses. (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes and prayers, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-13-2000).] |
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