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I Give my Heart to no One But You!!! Please Take Care of it!!!
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I Give my Heart to no One But You!!! Please Take Care of it!!! |
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LIL.MAMA Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 32 |
I GIVE MY HEART TO NO ONE BUT YOU!! BUT YOU HAVE TO TAKE CARE OF IT!! PLEASE DON'T BREAK IT, PLEASE DON'T LET ME DOWN YOUR THE ONE I WANT TO HAVE IT!!! I GIVE MY HEART TO NO ONE BUT YOU, YOUR THE LOVE OF MY LIFE, YOUR THE ONE THAT CAN MAKE ME SMILE WHEN I WANNA CRY!! SO NOW I AM GIVING MY HEART TO YOU, BUT PLEASE TAKE CARE OF IT!!! DEDICATED TO DAVID CALIX!! MUCH LOVE TO Y0U!! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That was a very meaningful poem and I loved it.Keep up the great work! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
LIL.MAMA: I have not read much of your work...in fact, I think that this is one of the first pieces that I have ever read. You have much potential and if you exercise it to it's fullest extent, you, like everyone who wants to be, can be a fantastic writer. Nice job. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Nicley penned lil mama! I haven't seen much of y our work either...but what I have seen I was impressed with. Giving your heart to someone can be a scary thing...be cautious...but have fun! Best of luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Hi nice poem and I think you did a woubderful job on the poem. I hope things work out for you and i hope to read more of your work. Lovely_Kris |
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