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Jenabou
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-08-12 10:33 AM

Somedays i truly believe ive gotten over you
and have forgotten all youve done to help me and mostly what you've done to hurt me
And i think we can be friends

But simultaneously at that moment all the painful memories crash over me like a tidal wave
with no escape im drowning in the tears
i just want to forget

I want things to be the way they used to be
i loved you you loved me back even tho you didnt want to believe it
we were both seeing other people,it would've been wrong
so we held it inside

But you didnt want that you wanted the feelings to vanish
so you hurled hurtfull words at me a broke so many promises it was like a i was caught in a rockslide
and thats the way you liked it

So now everytime i think i can talk to you again
when i think things can change and be like they used to
when we shared eevrything
i can't do it i cant speak one word to you
we aren't friends but that hardly effects the memories of you.........and me...........
YOU'RE NOT FORGOTTEN

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-12 02:10 PM

Very powerful poem, here. It makes sense to me, ya know? I really like it. In a morbid sort of way. Great job!

*~Meredith~*

Somebody stop the world,
I want to get off!
*me

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-08-12 02:10 PM

sorry, my computer froze.

[This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 08-12-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-08-12 02:10 PM

$#&*!@%!!!

I really am sorry.....

[This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 08-12-2000).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-08-13 09:23 AM

You've penned very powerful emotions Jennabou! It's often so very difficult to to become "friends" where once "love" bloomed, but time does help to mend the heart ... and beautiful memories can still remain. Very emotional thoughts!

Best wishes,
/Kit

GodsPerfktAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 28
Ohio

5 posted 2000-08-14 12:05 PM

this is pin point EXACTLY what I am going through right now! I think I will send this card to him and see what he thinks about it Thanks!

Jocelyn M. Cosgray

~*you cannot hold back a laugh any more than you can a tide,both are forces of nature*~

~*God gives everybird his wor

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-08-14 01:18 PM

wow...very nicely writ! beautiful and full of so much emotion. keep these great pieces coming!!

salooma

Crystalina123
Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

7 posted 2000-08-15 03:26 PM

I really like this poem b/c it's how I feel about my ex to some degree. Strangely enough, I was just talking to my friend about a similar situation. Good poem.

Love,
Crystal

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