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sweettalker24
New Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 4

0 posted 2000-06-19 12:15 PM

I LOVED YOU

I loved you, I loved you so
Why did you leave me, you left me so
I can’t stand this anymore,
Why did you close the door between you and me?
Now this is wrong, and I will never see,
Why? That you broke my heart,
I don’t know why we had to part,
I wish to the lord, that you may come back and stay with me, but
Tell me why you left; please don’t become a theft, stealing my heart,
I loved you and I always will, but I cannot see you over that hill,
Please come back to me, I will treat you right and It will be just
You and me

By CWO

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

1 posted 2000-06-19 12:27 PM

Welcome to Passions. very well written angst. i know the pain you feel all too well. i feel the emotion of your words. i can offer this little bit of advice i have learned. when your at the very bottom of the barrel, you can only go up.

i hope you enjoy your stay here at Passions. may it be as good to you as it's been to me.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-06-19 01:33 PM

BEAUTIFUL poem!!!! i know what you are going through me and my boyfriend were really close at one point and now its like hes trying to break free from me. i give you props for this poem. hopefully in the future you will get back together. GOOD LUCK with that.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-20 01:39 PM

beauty is set up here so different. i like the question at the end its like can we ever be again. good work.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

4 posted 2000-06-20 06:15 PM

Sometimes we do lose our love..I guess its better to show patience rather than giving up..in the end only two things can happen..be prepared...after all have a big heart to take things stronly and forgive if necessary..though to forget is impossible..dont be weak..

Sincerely
A_L

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-17 02:03 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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