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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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I hope ya'll like my little remakes of those popular poems we all know and love...this is helping me through my little problem with writing. Twinkle, Twinkle Little Heart Twinkle, twinkle little heart. Shine upon me from afar. Up above my world tonight. Concentrated love in light. Twinkle, twinkle little heart. I still wonder who you are. Your name, your face, a mystery kept from all my world to see. Twinkle, twinkle little heart. I feel we're not so far apart. Grace me now with your sweet touch... the light we share can be so much. Jeremy D. Halstead 8-10-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Bravo! Bravo! Just can't get enough of these beauties....do you think you could send me the whole series via email so I can print them out and keep em?? Would you mind? Ofcourse with your name on em...let me know. Salooma |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Your so talented Jeremy, really you are. What a beautiful poem.  -jessica- |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flowed very beautifully Jeremy ... such positive and tender thoughts. Keep up the great writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jeremy: Your poetry was one that I missed whilst being away. You always seem to capture the beauty of life and create fantastic pieces. This is a good one too. It's different and finds things to do with those boring old poems and turn them into something likeable. Nice job, ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was excellent!! I really liked that one! keep writing! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
I would be lying if I said that I wasn't pleased as usual. You are so talented Jeremy! I just wish that after so long of talking to you some of it had rubbed off...NO such luck! lol you're such a sweet heart Jeremy, I love talking to you and I can't wait to read more and more! Talk to ya soon! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Another job well done. Very beautiful as usual. As always I can't wait to read the next one =). Keep it up your doing well. luv, Jeanna P.S. Thank you for the reply on my poem "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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