Dark Poetry #2 |
Circe's Spell |
lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Circe's Spell What makes a man adore Brings him crashing to the floor? What makes a man sigh Leaves him senseless, dizzy, high? What makes him turn a girl Into diamonds, dirt, the world? What makes him give his queen His life, his joy, and gems unseen? What makes him sacrifice His blood, his self, his only vice? What potent spell is this That can bind a man With just one kiss? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..So true. And like most men, I've been a fool for lesser things. Said so well. Hardrock |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
What...indeed!!! Love is the only emotion that can't be faked!! Good job here!! I wonder myself. Thanx! Click |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Thank u for giving us the male's perspective of falling in love ... After recent experiences, I was pretty much convinced that the lot of them may be rather incapable of emotions like these. Anyway, I really like your works! ~verve |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uta,...gosh you've nailed this one. hehee. "Leaves him senseless, dizzy, high?"....love this part,...love all of it. Your writing is always something that I look forward to reading. Be well U. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ive had many positions with men..girl,friend..girlfriend, and I think I have seen alot of emotions run very deep with men, and seen them fall pretty hard too. This was really good, I liked it alot, made me think of many different circumstances I have witnessed. I respect a man non afraid of showing his emotions, thanks for sharing The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
lotharingia, Ahhh, what a question! I am one of those men, and I cant explain it either. I`ll let you know when I find out... Excellent poem! LarBear |
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