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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
like your kiss on my face the things I long to erase to move from here to there I want to eat your darker side digest the things you don't want me to know I want to touch your red hair melt the snow in our hearts and feel your hand taking mine again |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Jennie May, this is really excellent! These lines in particular really grab me: I want to eat your darker side digest the things you don't want me to know Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow Jennie May,...diggin' this big time. How'd this one slip away? It's such a cool poem. Interesting and creative wording that caught me. Thanks. Take care JM. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I liked all of this, especially melt the snow in our hearts!!! Very well done, hope to see more! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
jennie may, I have to agree with "lotharingia" the best part is I want to eat your darker side. Outstanding Job. LarBear |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jennie..This is really good. Some great thoughts expressed. Hardrock |
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