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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
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0 posted 2000-07-22 07:51 PM


-All in a Dream-
take a ride in through a dream
take a ride with the chorus queen
riding high on flashes of previous events
no itention of heeding any consequence
it's all here devour the power
above all realms this one towers
this is what is to have been
it was what now must begin
you are but a stable dream
and it really just doesn't seem
that it's ever going to end
that it even is, my friend
but take my word, this i swear
will be the best sweater to wear
no, not a mask
hey it's not the last
just a closed door somewhere in between
you and what's left of the chorus queen

J.L. Koehler


© Copyright 2000 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

1 posted 2000-07-22 09:28 PM


"chourus queen"
interesting wordage. Very inventive poem.
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-23 12:20 PM


~This definately took me for a ride. Great work. "Chorus Queen",...certainly IS interesting. Be well C. *Peace.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-08-06 10:34 PM


Voting....we've got 2 days left!
Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-08-06 10:48 PM


I would vote for this even if I weren't from Carolina...lol



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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