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Daydream Tales |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Daydream Tales (for Simon) Down by the sparkling sea Down through the wispy weeds Underneath the smiling sun We scattered silky-rough sand In our long black-gold hair Rubbed it gently through our hands We thought this was forever We were always together In all kinds of weather Reading poems by Lorca By the black, spinning water Down by the raging waves Down through the secret shades Underneath the frowning moon I imagined tall, dark men With silver-sequinned hems And in your dark Spanish hat You looked almost like that I dreamt dreams of Apollo You made love to Helen Maybe those dreams were hollow But they seemed so real then Note: This is about the time I spent with my (then) best friend Simon (or “Codpiece”) 1986-88. We were 16-18 and practically inseparable. Thanks to allan for making me remember! (Hi allan  )Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Hi Uta! Sometimes it's a definite advantage being a European! I get to read your poem while the rest of the world sleeps! I absolutely loved this. You create a wonderful atmosphere here. I can taste the salty air! A great poem, well done! Allan |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A really nice reflelction on times spent with a dear friend. Oh the memories..I enjoyed the read!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Simon was so fortunate to have known you. Beautiful memory shared here with us. I loved the construction...and your words. Hardrock |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very nice Uta, loved the imagery. Brings back my own memories. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Well done. It sounds like a wonderful time! Sing while you may |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I wish I could have been there. Sounds like alot of fun! Charming poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beauiful, filled with the feel of happy times. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hi you,...this is so lovely it really is...just that, lovely, in every sense of the word. Be well Uta. *Peace. |
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