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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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This is my idea of how a marriage or love realtionship should be. Just indulging in a little fantasy here. Someday..... At Days End Every day we rush about completeing tasks, work, errands, all about the same. That is, until days end when I rush home to you. Every night is different with you. Anything could happen. Tonight we may laugh a lot, at our own private jokes, kiss a little, be playful in eachothers company. Or maybe we will sit quietly in silence, as I write and you paint. Tomorrow, we may let the fierce passion that is always within us, have its way. Maybe I will be your maid, and you my prince. Or maybe we will just be us, loving with our hearts, bodies, and souls. Friday we could go out to dinner. Then again, we could stay home, and lick chocolate off eachother. Every night is an adventure. An oasis at days end I'm so happy to have found you again... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra...Now THAT'S the way I always thought it should be. Every day an adventure. It's hell when the boredom sets in...and love leaves. Hope you find your fantasy. Well put, as always. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
An oasis at days end a lovely thought....may I borrow this line for a future poem...you have inspired me *will give you credit in a quote? it's such a beautiful vision. ~~softly Maureen |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh yes. Wonderful! I hope your wish comes true! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sandra, Oh to keep the adventure and anticipation alive....The creativity, the suprises....Yes this is excellent, a wonderful way to imagine two people being together. Enjoyed, as always!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Excellent Sandra...idyllic and sweet. Hope it comes true for you. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Yep, that's pretty much how it should be. I'm right there with ya' Sing while you may |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i just can't call you sandra, i call you moonbeam, cuz your words never fail to cast the softest healing light in my life. what a nice escape. thank you for sharing. love ya girl. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Cat,..I wish you this a thousand times!!! *Love this. Love this side of you. Truly wonderful. Take care S. *Peace. |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Loved your "fantasy" and do know of marriages...longlasting ones too...that are like that. Unfortunately mine wasn't, but have come to grips with it. I do hope your wishes come true. Have been reading in here this afternoon and am again reminded that I am not the only one to have been hurt. It is good for me to know that. I appreciate the feelings shared. Linda |
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