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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
This isn't quite finished... Leaving Solitude in my dark space Time leading me away Seeking something brighter Than the past that I forsake Life bleeds slowly with every passing day Almost wrote my own death My strangled soul pleads Throw away the pen Burn the paper, smash the keys Stem the flow of misery this blackness breeds Gotta go, gotta leave This place, no longer me It's not so hard to break away Harder now to shake the pain For the past the present grieves When you've lost your heart You've lost your way Suffocate the future with your old pain Shouldn't be this hard to break away When you don't have the heart to stay I usually post under the name FJiznit, but I forgot my password and I can't access the email account that your password get's sent to when you try and find it out... Never mind... I needed a new name anyway. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Firstly, I had the same thing happen too me with the password thing. I emailed RON and he helped me get it right. The poem:" Well, I hope that these feelings have passed and that the pen stays to write another day. Good emotions, and a picture of a thousand words. LarBear |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey, this was very good. And all I can say is never throw away the pen, it may be our only salvation. Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nick/FJ...Nice piece here..can't wait to see the finished product. Hardrock |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
I must agree with Hardrock and more. If this is only part, the whole must be exceptional! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well welcome back to this place we call home.  Nice poem also. Missed ya, DkW |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Haha! I knew this was you! Nick is definitely better than FJiznit, bit of a mouthful that Your poem is really astoundingly good. I am very impressed. Are you OK? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh please finish!! This is very good. I agree too, keep on writing, don't give up on anything, Ive been surprised many times n my life at how things can turn around. Thanks for sharing!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
first let me say, back to have you amongst us again. secondly, to me you will always be FJ!! hee hee!! thirdly... leaving is never really finished is it?? this is a very raw poem, and i totally relate. i feel sometimes if i stopped writing then i wouldn't feel it so much or as strongly... ok now i am rambling. love this!! keep it up!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
this poem has probably been on here a long time but i haven't been in this forum for a while i i was looking at what all i've missed! i've missed an excelent poem! did you ever write the rest of it Nick? i hope so! i need to read it! |
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