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kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-21 02:48 PM

**** wrote this freehand, like 2 minutes, didn't change a word... i give thanks to my Lord.

I take this moment in time,
This very minute,
Wrapped in this very hour,
To stop my activity,
So routine and solitare-
To thank God for it anyway.
He has given me music,
Thousands of sounds to
Fill my ears and
Make my heart fly,
Though wingless my flight.
No one to call on the phone,
No house to jog over to,
Or run around the corner
To share this gift so profound.
But I will smile in spite
Of my life full of love
With no sight.

*****kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-07-21 02:54 PM

Kynder, you give US the most precious gift of all...you give us YOU. Lovely poem. Hardrock

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2000-07-21 03:16 PM

Hi Kynder,

U worte this in 2 mins??? WOW ... this is astounding!

~verve

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-21 03:58 PM

A very special thing to take the time to be truly grateful for what we are given, beautiful words!!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-22 12:50 PM

my Sis you can only take what your given and if you are happy with that God will give you better things. it's when your not happy with what you have that you don't get anything more. Love you Sis hang in there.
Love JayBean

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-07-22 02:05 PM

kynder, and never change a word. A burst of beautiful poetry.

why must we pray
screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-07-22 11:27 PM

~Incredibly beautiful words gurl!!! You have veeery nice freehand. Yup!!! Be well K. *Peace.

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

7 posted 2000-07-23 12:36 PM

simply great free hand writing there...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

8 posted 2000-07-23 12:02 PM

But I will smile in spite
Of my life full of love
With no sight.

this is soo beautiful, kynder..almost made me cry
~~softly
Maureen
*and sometimes what you write off the top is truest in feeling

L Tiuch
Member

since 2000-02-04

Posts 151
NY

9 posted 2000-07-23 05:24 PM

Beautiful! I am new here and in awe that you wrote this in 2 minutes. Beautiful!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2000-07-23 07:47 PM

Happier than your usual words, Kynder. Very lovely, and good sentiments. Its hard to be grateful for the good things, it seems the bad things fill us so full sometimes. Good reminder.
Moonbeam

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