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kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-23 05:07 PM

As I walk through waves of heat
That threaten to take me under,
I can smell, feel, even taste
The tease of Winter on the
Barely moving wind.

It brings the memory of
Cool arms that rocked me into slumber.
His heat would join with mine;
Losing sight of our begin
And our end.
The snow would trickle away,
Rivulets of newly made rain.

In the midst of sparkling cold
And dazzling ice,
He would reach to my glistening
Brow and wipe away the
Sweat that sprang up there,
Kiss gone the beads that sat
On my upper lip.
Paths of wet tracks-
He would follow down my back.
Reminding me of the heat of
Summer.
When it is the sun and
Its roasting rays making
My skin wet,
Not the motion of my lover,
His hands,
His sensual way.

*****kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-07-23 05:12 PM

Well, it GOT me sweating!! Such a beautiful memory...and so sensual. I need a nitro pill just to get my heart to slow down. You are tooooo good, Kynder. Hardrock

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-23 05:34 PM

~WooHoo Kynder Gurl!!! Such totally, sensually, enticing poetry here. Love it. All. Be well KG. *Peace.

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-23 05:50 PM

Yes! absolutely thought provoking!! Oh those moments of bliss, well described, such a great job!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-07-23 07:03 PM

Beautiful, sensual poem, and it's so unfair that now it is sun and not that wonderful lover, making you warm. Life really needs to make a change for the better here, for a lot of us at this forum. Take care.
Moonbeam

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

5 posted 2000-07-23 07:54 PM

Wow!! sensual and painful....very descriptive of life...sorry fate can turn on us in the end...

Good job!! Thanx!!

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