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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
I feel your pain, and try to know it I feel your pain, and wish to heal it but to heal, I must get close beyond the boundaries created to keep away the other people I wish that I could share your pain I wish that you would trust me so to let me in, and know you well beyond that mask, long hardened into your soul, beyond your shell I wish that you would share my pain I wish that I could trust you so I wish the pit inside myself where my anguish and self derision where the insults and the teasing go I wish that you could help me fill this pit withing me, gaping wide I wish that you could help me heal I wish that you could help me know ---------------------------------- I suppose this is a bit different then my others...I hope you guys like it... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh Beast! (I hope you don't mind me calling you beast!) Oh Mage! (is that better?) This is a sorrowful poem indeed! But sweet too! Is it about you? You are invited to share your pain with me!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I wish all that too Mage, very nice poem, hope things work out like this for you..Its so hard sometimes. "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Great theme here. You can always lay your pain on our doorstep. And a big doorstep it is too. Nicely put, Mag. Hardrock |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hey Mage, This is certainly laced with desolation and pain ... Great poem. ~verve |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
That void is so hard to fill sometimes. Hardrock is right, lay your troubles here, we all care!!! Nicely written The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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