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The Disability to Invision
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The Disability to Invision |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
Isn't it peculiar How humans have such a hard time Fully perceiving one another We struggle to witness The feelings of those encircling us I could drain out my soul But only few would savor I could illustrate to you How much my heart swells sometimes But only few could comprehend And maybe none - at all We all are The way we are All we all have those little quarks about ourselves And we all feel pesimistic sometimes In our own little unique way And we all feel joyful In our own blessed way But sometimes I feel completely Deviant Like I'm watching a normal world evolve around me And I am the exception Because I have a dimness which lives inside of me Full of desperation But I can hide it Because I have to And I just wish There was a passage To connect us Or at least... Connect Me |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I know that feeling of feeling disconnected...this was very good, alot of meaning in this poem, I can easily relate. Nice work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, this had a provocative edge, hinting at the darkness, but still somewhat upbeat. "I could drain out my soul, but only few would savor." I love that line. Very nice poem. And I can also relate to the disconnected feeling. Perhaps that is what makes us poets. "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Kari, A very interesting read. I can relate to the situation, Especially lately. I as well like the part of "I could drain out my soul But only few would savor" Very good, LarBear |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh yes. How I wish we could connect like that too! Understand without words, rather than misunderstand because of them!< !signature--> Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo [This message has been edited by lotharingia (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"But sometimes I feel completely deviant...because I have a dimness which lives inside of me"...whoo boy, can I relate to that? Well done. Hardrock |
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Fairy Princess Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64Fitchburg Ma, USA |
Hi. I know how your feeling cause I have a disability. It's so fussterating people think of you like a no body but then you gotta think. I'm a somebody and everyone has to be a somebody. I maybe only 17 but I know alot. My sister thinks of me different but I am not different. They can think what they want but I don't think like them. Bye ~*~THE FAIRY PRINCESS~*~ ~*~What you see is what you get~*~ |
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