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DeathTrippy
Junior Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 45
WY USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 01:26 AM

Frustration
Motivation
I can't write
I can't cry
My fight tonight

Agrivation
Sensation
I lost it
Can't write it
My mind tonight

No thinking
No breathing
I'm lost
Help me
I don't want to die tonight

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-07-21 01:51 AM

I hear your plea my friend. But do not really be thinking about dying. Death will not bring joy to us as your poems have. Great work

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2000-07-21 02:41 AM

Hmm... yep, it makes you so angry and everything when you can't write huh? Hope you're okay. Take care.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

3 posted 2000-07-21 02:48 AM

Awwww have I wished upon death many times. But hey.... if I were to die .....who would my place here? Uh huh (nods) no one!!
Nice poem .. I can feel the pain in it.

Peace
DkW

Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light

Magebeast
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 60

4 posted 2000-07-21 04:13 AM

There is always more to live...a great poem, though.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

5 posted 2000-07-21 05:25 AM

Don't worry, you've got us to look after you.

Great little poem, so full of despair!
I too, hope you're OK, though!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

6 posted 2000-07-21 08:27 AM

Many nights I have stared into the face of death, cheating him every time. I would play the game over and over again, almost enjoying it at times. I know the feeling all too well, my friend. I stopped playing that game many years ago..and starting staring into the face of life...what a much easier game to win...

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

7 posted 2000-07-21 08:37 AM

To not be able to write...such is a form of death. When you feel no motivation, no sensations...nothing to write about. I just shift gears, do some mind-cleansing...and usually come up with something totally out of character, and sometimes weird. Nice expression of your frustration. Hardrock

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