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Nineteen Steps To All I Fear
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Nineteen Steps To All I Fear |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Nineteen Steps To All I Fear Nineteen steps to all I fear, amplifying the strength to be had. It was glass beads to teeth, in hours of you, while secrets pasted themselves to walls in angry paper. Praying for your thirst on entry, eyes burning, crying for safety. From the time, the time of you. But lions tire and hours pass and gallons of all I am spill, splashing what was left across mountains of you, across the filth of your being. Engines die and doors slam and it's nineteen steps to all I am. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I cannot even come up with words for this, its so incredible. Some of your lines are just amazing. All your poems blow me away. I can't decide which I like best,"secrets pasted themselves to walls in angry paper". or "gallons of all I am spill, splashing what was left across mountains of you". Where and how do you get these poems?? I wish I could do it. Cat... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I ditto all Cat has said hon, you have become a wonderful writer!! In your time here in dark you have opened up, broadened, blossomed, writing wonderous poems such as this. Please take a bow hon, you've earned it!!!!!!!!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
The kind of poems you read, and re-read....and each time find a new poem within. Simply incredible, SF. Such a gift...Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, Spitfire, I ditto all the accolades and add much, much ****APPLAUSE****. GREAT PIECE! jwesley didn't know how to give you a gold star so changed the text to gold. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Wow SpitFire...quite a piece. While some of it went kinda fast for me, I could still really feel the emotion |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
Excellent. I grade your poem an A+ for emotional wallop. Written well and easy on the eyes. forrest |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very well written firebean. there is a method to your madness i would think. love your work. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Every time I read one of your poems I think: This one is the best, now she can't get better than this. And yet you do it every time! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Simpley...incredible!!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, They just keep getting better and better my friend. this rocks!!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
WOW!! Got me....Now I dwell on this one!! Thanx!!! Click |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I wish I could have come up with this one! This is truely amazing! I loved every line! "nineteen steps to all I am"-Really neat. I loved it! -Wren P.S. Tell me your secret, how do you come up with these poems? The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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