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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Hand me a new face my smiles lost it's grace from one too many unsightly sights I've changed but I'm not up for the chase Coat me in fresh skin my hide is wearing thin holy recycling of earthly flesh give in but you think they'd call it sin Grant me my rebirth put my temple to the earth the tunnel home is lit by labor pains breath in though I'm not sure what it's worth |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Michael...I think we all long for a "regeneration" now and then. Your poem says it so well. Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well written!! Hold on to who you are though. I am sure there is something good still hiding in there. Find it and make it dance (so to speak) Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Perhaps no longer grace, but maybe wisdom? I thought this poem was great! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ahhh yes mike g. this is divine. thank you for sharing. i thoroughly enjoyed reading your thoughts. you have a great natural rhythym. keep it up. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
"grant me my rebirth" awsome, I loved it. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I tried replying to this yesterday,...I guess it didn't go through. Anyway,...I felt it whole. Can't count how many times I have cried for this...."Grant me my rebirth". Well written. Take care MG. *Peace. |
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