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Distance Between us |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I saw you in the distance The brightness in your stare I knew at that very instant That only my heart could bare You and I were connected Bonded from the start Our hearts were as one That no one could pull part Yet you seem so far away So distant to my touch Feeling the loneliness Because I miss you so much The inches seem like miles The miles seem like years The seperation between us Grows wild with my fears So each night I say a prayer That God looks down at me Giving me the courage For the distance that has to be Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very pretty. Remember to say one also, for all who are like thee.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Nicely done! I always admire those who can rhyme. It's never been my strong point. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"the seperation between us grows wild with my tears" Perfect line, great poem. Talk to God for me too would you? "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
DKW, I think this is really good, alot of nice verses..I wish we all could get by without those empty spots we feel. Nice work!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...very good poem. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to move all these lovers close to one another? Out of sight is not, necessarily, out of mind. Hardrock |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Oh DKW... nicely put!  Excellent piece! |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
This is a great poem of hope and courage. Thank you for sharing!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
DKW...very nice! I know the feeling, and it is tough. Hang in there! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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