Dark Poetry #2 |
deadly pastime |
DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Listing my murders Naming the dead Counting my killed Sick and demented Watching the eyes Eyes scream silent No voice given to fear I cut out the throat Jewels that sparkle As precious as life Eyes shine sharp Diamond blade Engulfed in flames Blazing to my soul Breif moment of fire Life burns in my chest Where there is no heart I gain from my dead Momentary life Soul-catching my hobby DeathTrippy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yuck! Very graphic! Don't get me wrong, I think this is really, REALLY good. The image of evil you create here is totally awesome. I hope you're not hiding under my bed! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree with lotharingia, this is very graphic, but a good job with imagery here. Now and then I have to put that night light on!!! Good Job!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DT..this is the stuff movies are made of. Very intense...especially, "I gain from my dead, momentary life...". Nice job. Hardrock |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
NOw this is ABSOLUTALLY my kind of words!!!! I love it!! Kind of odd to read words that some one else wrote knowing they would come from yourself as well!!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Buddy you got problems. j/k Actually this is a great twisted little poem .Keep them coming. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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