Dark Poetry #2 |
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Surrender to Love |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone ![]() |
I know it's hard to gather up the pieces of your broken heart and try again. Hard to let go of remembered pain. Yet the holding on hurts even more. It will still find you, wherever you hide. In the darkest cave, or behind the thickest of doors. Just give yourself up. Don't bother looking back- you won't escape. Surrender. You might as well go willingly, as be arrested. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I like this Cat...its very hard to face the difficult and hurtful things. I too will try to turn my back when the pain is overwhelming...You WILL get through my friend!! Loved the last line. Great poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such struggles suck - we both know that!! Hon one last time - accept my apologies, it was beyond my control... This was excellent and describes how I feel right about now.. ![]() I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Very good comparison! Great poem! (And so true!) -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Sandra, How do you do it? Its like you were talking to me darlin`. I just want you too know Iam here for ya anytime. Great way to express yourself! LarBear (-: |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ooh yeah, expressed very well. Holding on does hurt even more... great poem! ![]() |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra...So good...and good for me. What a nice poem. If love comes around, I'll be the first to raise the white flag. Thanks...Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
WoWee. What truth there is in your words: Always try again. Never give up. You could miss out on the best thing in life otherwise! BrillllliANT!!! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very good work here, moonbeam. it is good to see hope in your work. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem i really enjoyed it and understand it totaly. keep it up my friend and i hope you find that love. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"Yet the holding on hurts even more."....SO,SO true. Also,....very difficult like you said,...Cat, you've done it here. You've described this so well. Take care you. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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