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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
In the city In my head The bells Ring on and on Designing schisms And infinite prisms Waking up visions Of right versus wrong Battles lost Sieges won And of things Long dead And gone Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Tremendous poem!  Great words... brought back some memories of my own!! "Battles lost, seiges won" - those words in themselves bring images to mind. But then, your poems always seem to do that! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...your poems never fail to touch something inside of me. "In the city in my head"...brings back so many memories long since forgotten. Great poem. Hardrock |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Sometimes it feels like the city in our head is far too congested. Glad I'm a country girl! LOL Great poem. Really enjoyed the read! Be good to You. ~Sash~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful words, great poem. I sent a previous message, apparently did not get in.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
lotharingia, Wow, What a powerful little poem. The vision of the bells reminds me of headachs of things better left "long dead and gone" Larbear |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
What an interesting way to declare the turning tables in our minds. Very well done. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
You have captured the chaotic city of most of our minds I think! Very good wordsmithing here. I especially liked the lines: Designing schisms And infinite prisms Waking up visions Of right versus wrong Excellent!  |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Teriffic job!! I just want to shut off the "thinking" sometimes, so I can relate to this easily. That city in our minds, so well put, great poem!!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I want a city in my mind! Cool poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~My heart is literally racing after reading this. Mmhhm. You have nailed it perfectly. Really lovin' this. Be well Uta. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful depiction of those reflecting times we all have now and again. Great work hon! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
"And of things Long dead And gone" For some reason this really hit me. I loved this poem! |
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