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Fixing a broken heart
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Fixing a broken heart |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Fiery draft, Unwinding the living art, Seeds of soul, Buried deep in passion, Gust of the moment, Shattered by the sign of halt, Hotness of ice, Uplifted by the wind, Nailing the river, And gathering a bouquet of stars, Presenting all this to you, So you can restore a broken heart. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
"And gathering a bouquet of stars, Presenting all this to you, So you can restore a broken heart" --- Soooo beautiful!  A wonderful way to restore a broken heart. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A beautiful thought and expression! Oh to mend a broken heart...Nicely done The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely piece. Broken hearts can be mended after all? Thanks.. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Each and every line is incredible in itself. Wording,...interestingly neat. Enjoyed, thank you. Be well X. *Peace. |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Wow...this was simply an amazing poem. Great Job! |
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