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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Hearing the plight, Of the helpless bird in flight, Screams of infection, Fill me with disguise, Wingless beatings echo in silence, Pleading to nature hoping for some reliance, Facing the facts, Its now too late to act, Breathing one final breath, Before approaching the vicious cycle of death. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A harrowing piece! The idea of facing the facts when it's really too late to act is scary. Very well done! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very intense, scary picture in few words.. Great. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Hearing the plight, of the helpless bird in flight..such loss of any hope, very good poem!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
This poem reminded me of one I had written way back in high school called 'Leichenzug'. It is also about the realization of death. I have posted it so you can read it. This is a subject I like to ponder. Thanks for the memories. |
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