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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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exquisite existance pain pleasure entwined eternal flesh soul bleeding loving "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh wow ali! this is great!! this is what i strive for, i feel less is more!! excellent work, i truly love this. it proves for me you can't have one without the other. just like here, no light without darkness. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
ali...I too liked this..it's "openness" that allows each reader to add their own perspective or fill in the blanks. Nice work. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
WoWee! Very vampiric! I like the format very much, with just a few words you have created a very atmospheric piece! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I thank you all for your words of kindness. I left the poem so open so that all could make thier own conclusion. I am glad to see that it worked as I wanted. lotharingia, Vampiric poetry is my specialty. It is what I have written for some time now and what I enjoy the most. : }~ "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This feels very sensual to me.. But then I always did love Lestat. Great piece. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Very, very good... so little said but so much *said.* I love vampire poetry as well. www.fvpf.org |
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