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The Lover's Kiss |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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The Lover's Kiss, the velvet touch. Your fingers spoke to me. It's been so long and missed so much. How long till I break free? Your strong arms roughly pulled me close and held me tight to you. Your warmth, a comfort in the night, you made my body new. Teasing lips and sexy eyes, I see them in my heart. Every night I miss you more, it's tearing me apart. The lonliness is getting worse. I feel you drift away. Your other life might close me out.. Oh, how I wish I'd stayed. Is there an end to all this pain, or am I doomed to this? When next you hold me in your arms, will we share the Lover's Kiss? |
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glidingdove Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13 |
That was a lovely poem - you have felt - and you have not forgotten... Abha |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Oh Cat...that really pains me. I hope, nay I pray, you get to experience that lover's kiss again. So well done here...Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Just to be able to re-capture that moment and then to have it become a lasting thing for you!!!!! Nicely done!! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Beautiful, lush images. I enjoyed this very much!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Sandra, "God I love your Poems" Excellent!! LArBear |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
cat *hugs* we got to talk. it seems that each of us is reading eachothers minds when it comes to poetry. this is how i feel about my ex. i might be going to see her in augest. and when i hold her and give her a kiss it wont be the same. it wont be the lovers kiss we once shared. i am gonna cry so hard when i see her. and i will be thinking of this poem when i do. excelent as always hun. *hugs* i will e-mail ya. your southern gentlman. hehehehejesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
What an excellent piece (like all of yours, of course). I could *feel* that longing. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
You have captured perfectly what distance and time can do to the frayed edges of a heart. I agree with Wren, "lush" images indeed. Wistful, too. Well done. www.fvpf.org |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Your imagery is wonderful...I could feel what you wrote and that is a hard thing to accomplish...but you have done it so well. I hope all is well with you and that if your words here are from personal expierience, that you will feel all that you wish with out fail soon!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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