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Spells Broken |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
It was your gentle embrace that I craved so very much In the silent night, when all but myself was asleep I could feel your strong arms wrapped around my waist, curled up in a warm, fuzzy blanket until sleep took over And dawn would bring more smiles along with constant affection, simplistic and wild young love This is the way it's meant to be, I love you and you love me And so I pull you closer, breathing you in But as the clock strikes twelve and the chimes begin, I am reminded that I lay here alone Left with longing, grasping only my dreams Note: This has to do with the title...if you don't care then skip it.  Well anywayz, the Fairy Godmother in the story Cinderella said that after 12 the spell would be broken...which was the spell that brought her and the prince together. Get the relation? Oh well...it's not important. Thanks for your time. < !signature-->I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Nothing worse than a dream-spell broken by the evil monster of waking! I get it! Chris |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
I think that dream lover could turn out to be a nightmare unless you can cope with waking up alone. Good stuff and clear imagery. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh those dreams that I have not wanted to awaken from. I thought this was very good!!! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DE...your explanation was not necessary. I understood the poem perfectly. I enjoyed it very much. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I know the feeling well. And why does the magic disappear at midnight?? Great poem.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I got it too...understand all too well!! Nice thing until the end!! Liked this!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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AnGeLiX17 Junior Member
since 2000-06-05
Posts 46Salisbury, NC |
KicK Ass Dru!!!!!!! ... can I say that here? well anyway that rocked!! love ya Kristi |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Sounds familiar to me. **** I could feel your strong arms wrapped around my waist, curled up in a warm, fuzzy blanket until sleep took over **** I really liked this part, very vividly Waking up to find that you're still alone is not a nice feeling. But someday somebody will be lucky to go to sleep next to you, you'll see  ~Broken~ |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
What a *dreamy*(no pun intended) poem! Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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