Dark Poetry #2 |
Parallel |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
In life things run parallel Constantly out of reach. You can stretch and stretch But never touch or meet. But, Still you try to defeat The barriar, The distance For That almost touching Instant I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
YES the object is to KEEP reaching for it ALL! Never give up or stop trying. When you do... its all gone. Nicely said Peace DkW |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
Loved it...I can almost reach it myself. Dee |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
An excellent poem Jeremiah! For it is the hope of finding what we reach for, if only for an instant, that drives us on. I'm glad that you're back for a while, BTW, as I have been missing your poems a lot! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
its nice to see you back ...and your right, whenever poeple stop trying the game is over. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, always reaching out,trying so hard, and almost never reaching. Or when you do, it slips right back to the other universe. Great poem. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh yes, so close yet so very far away, but we keep reaching!! Excellent job Jeremiah!!! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Hmmm...maybe that parallel universe you see is just a reflection of what you already have. Makes me think...hmmmmm. Welcome back....Hardrock. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Oooh! *Shivers*I like this one! Please write more! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Great way of thinking J.J. I have never thought of that, but its all too true. LarBear |
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