Dark Poetry #2 |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
She's looking for you again. Keeps knocking at my door, Asking where you have gone. Says you just disappeared, Possible you may never come home. I try to tell this poor girl No answers do I hold, I'm only her reflection, Staring back from a mirror So cold. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Excellent Poem!!!!!! It leaves me so speechless! DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I'm lost and I don't know where to find me. I'm going out to look for myself. If I should show up while I'm gone, tell me to wait till I return. I never stare at my dog or mirrors...neither of them likes it. Nice poem, Kyndie*** Hardock |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very good poem...enjoyed it!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Excellent. One of your best. I am envious (of your brilliant poem, not the situation described ) Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Dear Kynder, Cool stuff ... *thumbs up* verve~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kynder, I can tell you this, the same girl is in my mirror. Perfect writing, as always.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
SisBean you do amaze me. i love this one to. but i most ask don't you wish to look at yourself your just wonderful Sis. i hope nothing is wrong with you. Love Jaybean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Yet, some times there may even be a man staring in the mirror as well. You speak for all of us. jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Take it from a man that has to sneek up on a glass of water to get a drink, I don't look into mirrors. They crack I crack then I dissapear. love it kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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