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Set Me Free |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
Set Me Free One day a friend came to me He told me he was tired He told me he was in pain He said he wanted to end it all I told him that would sadden me I asked him if I could help carry his burden He said no, and I urged him not to go He asked me a question He said Does it pain you to know I want to be free? Without my answer I knew he was already gone |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Zumble,...this one got right under my skin *chills*. Very affective writing. Be well. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This was so sad hon, knowing you couldn't help your friend, wanting to, but the fight is really there's alone... Well done  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really can't say anything to ease or change the situation. all i can say is what a excellent way to deal with your feelings. it says so very much. good work. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Does it pain you to know I want to be free"...I understand the question perfectly. Hope your friend took some time to ponder this decision. Well done...Hardrock |
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