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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Self declared insanity Cause? A technicality Pain - now a speciality Darkness - my reality. Happenstance is fiction Everything happens for a reason Emotional treason No matter the season. Photographs develop wholly black My image and life gone - I want them back Seems to me there's something I lack Daily glimpses of darkness - a fact. This is my lot My path to walk this day Keepers of the Light appear to me And once again show me the way...... Well hi everyone Isis is back, my back is still pretty crook and painful, so I'll be making little daily visits for a few days yet. Missed you all heaps  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Nice. I like the begining it hits home. Self declared insanity Cause? A technicality Pain - now a speciality Darkness - my reality This is a very meaningful poem. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Star Glad you liked it I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isis, good to see you again. I like this poem a lot. Very meaningful to me. I feel exactly as described. Take care, feel better sandra "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem is awsome! "Happenstance is fiction Everything happens for a reason" I loved these lines esspecilly! -Wren P.S. It's very nice to see some of your poetry again! The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks CatalinaMoon glad you can relate we all feel this way at times don't we? Wren thanks too, glad you liked those lines I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Isis,i like rhyming poems and you do it so well here!! Like these lines:everything happens for a reason emotional treason no matter the season moi like also the little glimpse pf hope at the end of the poem |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I am glad to see ya back, Isis!!! And I hope all gets better for ya soon. Great poem also. I see ya never lose your touch!  Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i am still perplexed as to why my emails are blank!! it makes me sad cuz i know we would just have volumes to say!!! i hope your back heals better than new. this poem is sooooo very good isis. kinda different for you. i love the rhyme. keep it up. and remember use your knees, not your back!!!!!  love, kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
WELCOME BACK MY SISTER!!!! *hugs* it is great to see you around again. i missed you so much. you are my twin, my soul mate, my true sister. and we all hope you are better soon. i loved this poem as well. =) pain now my specialty, darkness my reality. those lines really hit home. great work hun *hugs* Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Isis. . . So glad to have you back also!! Superb poem... ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Isis! Your poem really struck a chord in me... I think it's simply brilliant! cheers, verve |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone! I had fun playing with the heavy rhyming format and have done another called 'Again' in the same style. Glad you enjoyed it I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Emotional treason"..boy, do I know that. Great poem. Hardrock |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
PS...you know you're getting old when your back goes out more than you do. Welcome back. Hardrock |
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