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Halls of Hell (Nightmare, Insect PR).
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Halls of Hell (Nightmare, Insect PR). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~This is not my usual,..but it's a message.~ Halls of Hell (Nightmare, Insect PR). Walls wet with liquid life dripping, drowning darkness surrounding halls of hell terror chasing me burning eyes can't see screaming echoed through flame and fire sanity hung on wire sweaty head pounding with pain tears of glass it did rain tattered feet running on fumes stone walls entomb cries of horror flying in the air releasing a message tear this tear it traveled far from this place right upon Insect's face message retrieved he set off to save me from darkness' evil cave hallway's heat and lack of air filling mind with deathly fear just in time 'ol Insect came and hell's beasts he had tame he showed lights on the other side tears of joy I then cried to be flying in freedom's sky released from evil's eye he awoke this weary one with laughter and a smile thank you Insect for making days worthwhile. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
How sweet (in the end, I stress). I hope insect is pleased! Who is Nightmare, BTW. Is it a person? Am I dim?  I have to go now, because my bladder is bursting!lothy  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
very intense poem, dark. Had me cowaring under my chair. Wonderful poem, moves at neck break speed. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire, Hooray for Insect!!!!  Sorry, had to say that. Anyone who helps you out is tops in my book.This was a powerful message my friend. I hope all is well with you. Great writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sweetness of Hell Sanity showers an infinite thread Weaving the unthinkable in your head Tears of gold glitter and shine Brighten this sky of yours and mine Darkness finds a place to hide Trying to lure you into his side Handing pretty candy shiny and red Tasting its flavor he penetrates your head Sweetness of hell a devouring treat Is nightmare's rope to slow down your feet This hall of hell stretches forever Running to freedom a doorway to never Passing rooms and out of breath Every step closer to a nightmares death But up ahead a room with a glow You enter to find a feeling you know You hear little clicks coming from a window This is your escape you know you have to go Opening the window low and behold A little insect with a wing in a fold He says come this way and we will sing I'm a little insect with a little sting YOU MY FRIEND ARE A MESSAGE TO SEND WE CAN SING TILL ETERNITY'S END YOU ARE THE BLANKET, THE GOLDEN FLEECE YOUR MESSAGE OF JOY YOU CALL *PEACE __________________________________ Thank you for the poem And this one is for you I'll send some more trucks (Love's Genius) [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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