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Wanting you.........
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Wanting you......... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I want so bad to touch you To run my fingers through your hair Just to tell you what you mean to me To show you how much I care To run my fingernails down your back On your chest my head will lie Breathing in your golden scent Holding you till I die Giving you that special hug That was created just for you Kissing your lips so gently For you shall never again be blue I yearn for these things To happen between you and I Yet distance keeps us apart And for now... I understand why Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...As I read you poem, I found myself wanting all those things..but the understanding, that was the key. I love the way you look at things. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This may be a duplicate post, who knows the computer just did a weird thing.  Anyway, DKW, you have said it again, and wow this is just like an excerpt from my life. Great poem, states the pain of the seperation very well. Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Ashley~Marie New Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 5 |
You have a shining heart and it shows here. |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Very pasionate is your heart. True feeling of deep love and longing. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
A well done poem on love. Did someone turn on the oven in there? Believe me, I know how you feel. --the little one |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too can sympathesise hon, know those feelings well. As usual well written, and I want to thankyou for the birthday poem/message you did for me, I really appreciate it hon.. thanks. *hugs* I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem... and i know the feeling too well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Yet distance keeps us apart And for now...i understand why oh,the bitter agony of longing!  love these lines...simple yet subtly hints |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
this made me cry. sound like something i exactly said for my ex-girlfriend. she was and still am the love of my life. but alas i left her home in virginia and i regret it to this day. distance keeps us apart and i DONT know why. lovly poem hun. i wish i could reply more but i am crying pretty badly. love this one. great work. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
I love the writings of love and the conflict of tring to attain that love. I can relate to this one, in a sence of a unatainable love. Just the thought of holding that person makes my heart beat faster. Excellent Poem LarBear |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Always loving - lovely! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Thanx everyone! Wanting to be with someone and knowing you cant is very very very difficult. But I believe if its real love than it should hold strong till things are ready for the two of you. Yeah I know I am an old romantic Thanx again!!  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! This one really struck a chord with me. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Romantic and touching...the distance could be perhaps two hearts are not in the same place...ready to proceed...I am waiting on someone's heart right now...James |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
It says it all...the pain of wanting someone so far away. I can relate so well. I look forward to the next one. Dee |
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