Dark Poetry #2 |
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Her name is "Woman |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
HER NAME IS ALSO - WOMAN She is the power that sustains life on earth Her name is Faith She is the person to whom all look for strength Her name is Truth She is the breeze that cools fevered brows Her name is Love She is the light that guides the paths of men Her name is Constancy She is the pillar on whom all men lean Her name is Wife She is the silent giant cradeling the world Her name is Mother She is the water that washes away all fears Her name is Temptation She is the wisdom of the ages come to save all Her name is Teacher She is the fire which spurs men to strive Her name is Ambition She is the sword that frees men from slavery Her name is Mistress She is the mystery which no man can solve Her name is Enigma All these names she has. She also goes by another name..... "Woman". Deepak Menon |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Superb Deepak, just superb. How right you are! Just another fine example of your wonderful poetry. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this sounded almost biblical. And how great that you have the awareness of how wonderful we women are. ![]() Superb writing as usual.. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
She is the words that give life to our poems. She is the poet that gives hope to our lives. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yes, this is truly brilliant. Women's creative power and her role as mother and muse have inspired men throughout the centuries. You express this admiration perfectly here. On the subject of constancy I have to add my favourite quote about this: “Nothing is more constant than inconstancy itself” said by Baldanders in Grimmelshausen’s Simplicius Simplicissimus. ![]() Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I am awestricken.....This is wonderful and , by me at least, so appriciated!! Seems that most of the time we/ women are seen as nothing more than objects, it is wonderful to see that there are some who see us as so much more!!! For this I thank you. I will make it a point to have my husband read this...for he too is one that sees women as so much more and I know he will too appriciate your words!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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glidingdove Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13 |
That is another facet of Deepak! |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Thank you all for your comments - In fact one can write volumes about women - and by volumes I mean volumes of wonderful things, and if I resisted the temptation to go amok in their praise - it was because even volumes would be as insufficient as this little poem. Bows to all the wonderful women who make this planet a place fitting for us to live in! Deepak |
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