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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Foolish game! My heart is not a trophy! My soul is at stake. I bet my ass, 'cause I always win, The cost is more than you can show, I lost my faith on a bet? I never thought I could, but it was so good. Was that way I saw it? I can't remember..... The demon has slipped his leash,And now runs at will in my mind. Hope and fear are hand in hand! How can it stop? Please make it stop!! [This message has been edited by Click (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Well f**k me, I did not know I felt this way!!! Click |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Click, dealing with the "demons" is tough, but also up to You...You must ask Yourself, my friend, if You can handle the truth. No matter what, I will be Your friend always. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Click, I always look for your poems and you never disappoint me! This one is absolutely brilliant. The format is extremely effective! It makes me feel the conflict, turns my mind into a pretzel. "Hope and fear go hand in hand" what an image, what a contradiction! And what a powerful line: The demon has slipped his leash,And now runs at will in my mind. This poem really gets me wondering what made you write it ... I do hope you're ok! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Stunning discovery??? good poem. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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