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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
*Yawn* Aww man another one? Okay... -------------------------- When you are gone, the soul in me trembles, oh so slightly. Without your voice in the phone, talking to me nightly. When you are gone, my battle with darkness is lost. Threatening to take over. My body. When you are gone, darkness creeps into me. Something that the ordinary world, doesn't see. Where are you? --the little one |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Poor little one. I understand exactaly how you feel. Great poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Aww...  This is kind of a sad poem...is there anything I can do to cheer you up? If so, just ask me...  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very well put, i esp like the part about "darkness creeping into me but the ordinary world doesn't see"... i only hope this is just a poem and not personal  feel free to e-mail me if this is what you are feeling now |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwwwww such a sad poem!  But let me give ya some advise that a dear friend off the internet gave me........ Never give 100% to one person and one person only. Because if/when that person leaves your world will seem to fall apart. Spread a little bit of love around. (I hope I said all that correctly )Great poem BTW! Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear little one A precious, painful poem, written with such elegance and emotional flair. I can and do so relate to this one. Chin up, friend. Sylvia |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
AWWWW great poem & I know excactly how u feel I have been in a long distance relationship for 1 year & 2 months now (we live 5 hours away from each other) & its sooo very hard anyway enough about my life good job!! LOVE ELMO |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes kid when they are gone it seems as though the darkness has a running start on your soul, and no one can see this. But you have a small light within this darkness and that's your poetry, it will shine bright enough to see your way in a storm. Love, light. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Little One..."Without your voice in the phone, talking to me nightly"...so many relationships are built on you, him/her and ma bell. Sad poem...but so true. Hardrock |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Nice poem, very sad. I've felt like that at times when I'm away from home. |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Nice poem, very sad. I've felt like that at times when I'm away from home. |
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