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That's Life |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Sitting on the couch just stareing into space. How to live my life to set my own pace. Saw the whole picture of what lif is about. How to walk and talk not to scream and shout. To teach peace and lov not war and hate. to believe in yourself not to believe in fate. People are waring it's always the same. They shoot and kill as though it's a game. Death and destruction when will it end. Give it some time it just might mend. Life is strange this much we know. It's always the same where ever we go. Lick your wounds and walk away. So you can live yet another day. Tell the world what you have learned. Maybe then the tide will be turned. Once we have learned how to do these things. That is the time we've earned our wings. THAT'S LIFE..... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Star, very nice, flows well, and great message. Upbeat in a depressed kind of way  (I can relate, I have 2 sides that are struggling always) "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
this kicks a**...no other way to say it! I love it!!! keep up the awsome poetry! EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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