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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Damned The night bled a crimson red, My heart, I surrendered, to burn at Salem's stake. Ritual drums pounded at my ears, But it drowns not the scream of my tears. The fiery flames lept around in a trance, Apathetic faces circled in blasphemous chants. Whirling and prancing like dancing demons, As if to purge my soul of Love's venom. The rank taste of my impaled heart, Immaculate no more, branded by a Serpent's rapier. Now eternally doomed in Damnation's hell, Never again to hear Eden's tolling bells. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Verve... thanks for dropping this tasty slice of the night on us! Christopher |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow. this is exquisite!! what a image. i loved this!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Verve...very visual, very graphic.....nice work. Hardrock |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Very good. I like the darkness. Keep it up. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I LOOVVEE darkness, and this hit the spot! Nice work! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Everyone, Thanks for your replies. I haven't posted anything here for a long time now. It's really heartening to know that i haven't been too out of touch. =) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is intense! A fine piece of work! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Grand imagery and so well written....Wonderful. I enjoyed this read , indeed!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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