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insect
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since 2000-04-22
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0 posted 2000-07-12 10:50 PM


Prince of Darkness

You will see black
Black as pitch
Dark's demons begin their attack
More evil then a witch

A spell casting *****
There is no escape
Your body covered with bugs that itch
Screaming the sound of a blank tape

Your soul cry's out rape
Feels like a corpse rotting in a sack
Meet me Prince of Darkness in a black cape
My heart so Dark my blood is burnt black

I'm your only friend stabbing you in the back
Throw you down a bottomless pit
Then strapping you in a torture rack  
You taste my flesh in your spit

Choking unconscious till you admit
From smoke pouring out of hells fire stack
Your hollow nothing starts filling with it
You’re my Dark child soul that only sees black


© Copyright 2000 insect - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-12 11:02 PM


~Holy hell Insect,...how very dark of you. Gosh,..your words have filled this head of mine with the most vivid of haunting scenes. Bbrrr.
~"My heart so Dark my blood is burnt black,
~You taste my flesh in your spit,
~You’re my Dark child soul that only sees black"........Lines like this that just blow me away. Bravo 'my darkness. Take care. *Peace.



Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-07-12 11:02 PM


Bad hair day????
Very somber
btw--thanks for the light reading.. it brightened my day...
< !signature-->

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".  



[This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 07-13-2000).]

**STAR**
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 26
San Diego, Ca.
3 posted 2000-07-12 11:16 PM


If you are that dark you just might get a reply from the Prince for this one.  Great piece.
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-07-13 01:07 AM


I see I have a soulmate in the darkness.  Very good insect...we bottom dwellers have to stick together.  Hardrock
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-07-13 05:05 AM


This is fantastic!
I do love stuff like this!
Brilliant!


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2000-07-13 07:24 AM


Damn! I think that might have me looking under the bed and in the closet before bed..Very scary images. Intense.
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
7 posted 2000-07-13 07:31 AM


Thats it, Im leaving my night light on!!! Chilling!!!
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

8 posted 2000-07-14 12:40 PM


SpitFire…Precisely Robin!! Darkness all around us? Oops!!
                 The light switch is off! (click)
                  To the bat cave girl wonder!!

Prometheus…Ya! You know when ya wake up and a piece of
                        hair standing strait up on the right side and a
                        piece of hair standing strait up on the left side!!
                        It's a Devilish do!!!

**STAR**…You mean formerly!!
                       Welcome to Passions

Hardrock…I 'm kinda new here. So far it's a hell of a place!

lotharingia…Your response just floored me!

catalinamoon…Don't worry! Light five candles in a star and I'll
                          check in on you later!

Deborah1…Your night-light won't be hot enough!
                     I'll be right up with some fire!

Thanks for the souls everyone!
Hey who threw that shoe at me?

"Oh! Hum!! Another day another soul"

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
9 posted 2000-07-14 12:52 PM


WOW!!! Now I see what I was doing wrong!    I was looking for the Dark Knight and not the "darn" Prince  
Excellent work here!! Keep it up!

Peace  


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

10 posted 2000-07-14 10:39 PM


Dark_kisses_Within…Your soul is mine!!
                                      Thank you

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
11 posted 2000-07-23 02:26 AM


Well your writing is taking a strange turn, all I can say is don't skip your pills. yikes!

Parker

insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

12 posted 2000-07-25 10:10 PM


Haleyja…Thanks a lot!
                 I put a lot into the rhyming on this one.
                 Each verse rhymes from the one before.
                 Thanks again
                  The Bitc* word magically disappeared!

tookabear
Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28
Mansfield, TX USA
13 posted 2000-07-25 11:57 PM


Insect.... absolutely breathtaking... wow....
Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
14 posted 2000-07-26 01:08 AM


Well, LOL, this is dark!
insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

15 posted 2000-07-26 08:48 PM


tookabear…WOW! Thanks for the WOW!
                    Welcome to Dark passions

Christopher…*2800 Thank you !
                      

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

16 posted 2000-08-07 11:23 PM


I WANT YOUR SOUL


Prince of Darkness

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

17 posted 2000-08-07 11:35 PM


Get back you!!!
I thought I was on YOUR side???
Until I know for sure,...the fire's on!

*Spitting*



*Peace???

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

18 posted 2000-08-08 12:32 PM


BURN ME BABY!!
LOVE IT WHEN
YOU GET HOT!!



Prince of Darkness

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