Dark Poetry #2 |
Prince of Darkness |
insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Prince of Darkness You will see black Black as pitch Dark's demons begin their attack More evil then a witch A spell casting ***** There is no escape Your body covered with bugs that itch Screaming the sound of a blank tape Your soul cry's out rape Feels like a corpse rotting in a sack Meet me Prince of Darkness in a black cape My heart so Dark my blood is burnt black I'm your only friend stabbing you in the back Throw you down a bottomless pit Then strapping you in a torture rack You taste my flesh in your spit Choking unconscious till you admit From smoke pouring out of hells fire stack Your hollow nothing starts filling with it You’re my Dark child soul that only sees black |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Holy hell Insect,...how very dark of you. Gosh,..your words have filled this head of mine with the most vivid of haunting scenes. Bbrrr. ~"My heart so Dark my blood is burnt black, ~You taste my flesh in your spit, ~You’re my Dark child soul that only sees black"........Lines like this that just blow me away. Bravo 'my darkness. Take care. *Peace. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Bad hair day???? Very somber btw--thanks for the light reading.. it brightened my day... < !signature--> Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
If you are that dark you just might get a reply from the Prince for this one. Great piece. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I see I have a soulmate in the darkness. Very good insect...we bottom dwellers have to stick together. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is fantastic! I do love stuff like this! Brilliant! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Damn! I think that might have me looking under the bed and in the closet before bed..Very scary images. Intense. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Thats it, Im leaving my night light on!!! Chilling!!! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SpitFire…Precisely Robin!! Darkness all around us? Oops!! The light switch is off! (click) To the bat cave girl wonder!! Prometheus…Ya! You know when ya wake up and a piece of hair standing strait up on the right side and a piece of hair standing strait up on the left side!! It's a Devilish do!!! **STAR**…You mean formerly!! Welcome to Passions Hardrock…I 'm kinda new here. So far it's a hell of a place! lotharingia…Your response just floored me! catalinamoon…Don't worry! Light five candles in a star and I'll check in on you later! Deborah1…Your night-light won't be hot enough! I'll be right up with some fire! Thanks for the souls everyone! Hey who threw that shoe at me? "Oh! Hum!! Another day another soul" |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!!! Now I see what I was doing wrong! I was looking for the Dark Knight and not the "darn" Prince Excellent work here!! Keep it up! Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Dark_kisses_Within…Your soul is mine!! Thank you |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well your writing is taking a strange turn, all I can say is don't skip your pills. yikes! Parker |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Thanks a lot! I put a lot into the rhyming on this one. Each verse rhymes from the one before. Thanks again The Bitc* word magically disappeared! |
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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
Insect.... absolutely breathtaking... wow.... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well, LOL, this is dark! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
tookabear…WOW! Thanks for the WOW! Welcome to Dark passions Christopher…*2800 Thank you ! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I WANT YOUR SOUL Prince of Darkness |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
Get back you!!! I thought I was on YOUR side??? Until I know for sure,...the fire's on! *Spitting* *Peace??? |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
BURN ME BABY!! LOVE IT WHEN YOU GET HOT!! Prince of Darkness |
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