Dark Poetry #2 |
Travel Bug |
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
Restlessness settles fast In these bones longing For distant lands. Gypsy blood boils in my veins. Wanderlust has become my name. Wish my actions spoke louder than these Words I spout. My skin, itching to scratch, How it longs to shout. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder...I really identify with this. I too have wanderlust. Go...fly...find those adventures you seek..before it's too late. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yes. I've got that too! Except I don't want to travel: I want to move somewhere else. The Germans have a word for this (Fernweh), an English equivalent would be "Farsick" (as opposed to homesick), sounds daft, doesn't it? Enjoyed your poem a lot! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh another great one. Me too, I always long to be somewhere I'm not. Always..With me its not the act of traveling, but the being in a different place that I crave. Great stuff, obviously making us think. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh this sure touches that place within myself, I always had a reason not to "leave home" but the dream is there!! Very well put, and if you can, do it while you can!!! Very good writing |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
sometimes we need to go elsewhere in order to find ourselves.. nice poem, kynder. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
it's great to have you back my friend. this is a great piece to return on enjoyed it alot and when i return you will be saying the same to me i know. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nice poem kynder...gonna have to go some to catch up with my feet though, been itching since the first leaf budded. Wonder if this stems from our "prehistoric" days...reckon? jwesley |
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**STAR** Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26San Diego, Ca. |
Nice peom. I think all of us have that urge to wander. Some feel it and act while others only keep it locked inside. Keep it up. |
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