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Re: TOXIC
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
-Aural capacity difinitive -Olfactory heightened -Vision dilated and glazed -Airways heavy and choked -B/P 200 over 60 -Fevered and shivering -Fluid intake maximum -Neural activity erratic... PROGNOSIS -definitely toxic waste. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nancee....coming from a medical background, I understood this perfectly. I liked how you used the Prognosis, instead of Diagnosis..yes, we will all become toxic waste someday. (For further reference, see the movie "Soylent Green") Hardrock |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Great! And a suggestion: Better yet, read "Make Room, Make Room" by Harry Harrison...It's the book Soylent Green was based on and delves much deeper into the idea!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Nancee, I was terrible at science but I can get my head around this. A very interesting piece, really enjoyed it. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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