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Love letters and tears
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Love letters and tears |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I would love to grow old looking at you Your heart speaks out to me Yet i am beyond redemption beyond hope All is death all gone in smoke How i hoped how my dreams are crushed in the moring as light returns Hold me always be my spark In the night I look out to you In my way I love you always But as you begin so do i end walk with me awhile hold my hand just avert your gaze as i walk away over a cliff you have my tears Could you find a place In the last hope you gave To return to a grave unmarked Why now you come to me In my darkest night I am defeated My last is done The monster inside has won Its eaten the good Now like rotten wood I alone will die Don't be with me now Let me leave in peace The darkness is so appealing Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I would love to grow old looking at you Your heart speaks out to me Yet i am beyond redemption beyond hope All is death all gone in smoke How i hoped how my dreams are crushed in the moring as light returns Hold me always be my spark In the night I look out to you In my way I love you always But as you begin so do i end walk with me awhile hold my hand just avert your gaze as i walk away over a cliff you have my tears Could you find a place In the last hope you gave To return to a grave unmarked ---------------- walter this is so sad ... you write with so much emotion and heart... how can you say you have no hope ... your poetry has so much soul in it... I know you take your comfort in the dark... but please dont become lost in it... let your poetry be your light... your heart and hope always shine in your words... take care, please jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Janet speaks such truth here, please hold onto the light, keep the faith and hope, your poetry is filled with emotions, very well written, I hope to read more, Im wishing happiness for you!! |
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Traveller New Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 6 |
Dark world of which we are a part. We head toward the darkness because it is a refuge, it appeals to us. Does not man love darkness rather than light? For in that darkness our fears are hidden, our past is unseen. Fear it not, it is a haven for the lost soul. Traveller |
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Nancee Junior Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 45Australia |
Well Walter...I feel it is brilliant. Enough is enough. But more of your work, please. I would like to agree with Travellers comment(Welcome) and urge a post. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
the darkness has swallowed many a soul including my own. so in this you are not alone my friend. true all of our storys are differant but one common thing, heart ache. and sometimes that will never go away. but overtime it might lessen. and remember you always got friends here who care about you. great work |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
the darkness has swallowed many a soul including my own. so in this you are not alone my friend. true all of our storys are differant but one common thing, heart ache. and sometimes that will never go away. but overtime it might lessen. and remember you always got friends here who care about you. great work Once upon a time I was falling in love but now I'm only falling apart, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. Once upon a time th |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Quite good, Walter. More please. Hardrock |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Walter, I like this type of poem. Moving into the feelings and emotions of love. Great writing. LarBear |
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