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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I left the room early to gather some air and get some space between me and the gossip clouds She came to me as I looked in admiration at the kingdoms of dry forest and red clay She said, "You're so adventurous and excited- it's a beautiful thing really. You've got time though, you're life isn't going anywhere anytime soon", I laughed a little somewhat micheviously and with bright eyes I said, "that's exactly what I want to change." It reminded me so much of your beauty, The desert heat much like your intensity Thirsty and uncharted, an echo of your being Maybe that's why I crave to be lost, out exploring in the canyons Maybe that's why the desert has stolen my heart Note: Just so you know...the woman that I had been talking to is not the same person that I refered to as "you"...wouldn't want any confusion.  < !signature--> I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very nice...I miss the "coffee pot" and Talaquepaque. Do another. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Yeah...I miss it too...especially the hiking through the grand canyon and Tlaquapaque. There's a lot of art and culture in that town...gotta love it. Thanks for your time. < !signature-->I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
The title caught me...almost as if I had been there before. Must be dejuvu all over again. Wasn't it wonderful that Rex could identify so well with the place? Beautiful imagery. Hardrock |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Yeah...I'm glad he could and I'm also glad that you liked it. I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow! Great poem! I love the diolouge you included! Great work! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The dense heat..much like your intensity, very descriptive wonderful imagery here, I liked this alot Nostalgia is like a grammar lesson...You find the present tense..and the past perfect "Anonymous" |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This poem is sublime indeed! Your description is hot! (Scuse the pun  ) This line: Maybe that's why I crave to be lost, is just so excellent. Craving to be lost ... Wow! I even got that the you and the person you are talking to are different people! Is this where you spent your holiday? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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