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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I am a duplicate Alive alone To look at you When you go I disintegrate Nothing but A duplicate Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! Another great one!  I disintegrate Nothing but A duplicate This puts an image right before your eyes! Excellenté !! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...some of your best work is in these little "snippets" of imagery you create. I admire your work so much. Hardrock |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Very vivid picture this creates....you say so much in these little pieces. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
"Alive alone To look at you" Very beautiful......great concept! Love this poem! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OH, I could feel the pain there. Beautiful.. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes are we only what we create? who knows. this is another great piece from you and i hope to see more real soon keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
So wistful... rather like I feel now. I would love to know whether the other in the pair feels the same, and perhaps they haven't talked about it? But that is for the speaker's partner to know. So much left hanging, and it only adds to the weight of the poem. |
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