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Occurrence of the unimaginable
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Occurrence of the unimaginable |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Fiery pits in heaven, Garden of Eden in hell, Shades of light Now choose to hide Breath of fire Combine with my desires, What twist and turns Complexity of such things with simplified ends, Amplified by the next set of waves of time, Time tide turns as the thunderous light approaches, Seeking the pleasure you wretched witch, God just sits there and watches, Is this a trial? Or a sheer game in which I am to be toyed with? Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Imaginative. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I like this, it is very intense. This line is remarkable: Time tide turns as the thunderous light approaches, Are you referring to someone in particular? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~**BANG**,...this just uumm,..shoot, I wish I could talk on here...have you people hear me...ggrrr,...it's so frustrating not to be able to let you hear the noises this makes me make. hehe. Seriously,...you just sort of spit this at the reader,..YES!!!, I love it. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Complexity of such things..." much like your poem. I like it. Hardrock |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
lotharingia , I am referring to the poem itself. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i like this as well my friend. you say it so well to give it an image. and i love the question at the end. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
man this is so powerful! and to think we prolly will die without ever truly knowing. excellent, as always noxie!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Thanks for replying. You seem to be my fan. Just kidding. Thanks kynder. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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