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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The warm summer nights, Rippling water I would drown in desire The ways you would taunt The agony The ecstasy Sparkling eyes Add a soft touch Like whispers on the breeze Two nomadic souls That sought to capture Vivid memories |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow! stunning! Lovely description!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, two nomadic souls.. I love that part.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Simply wonderful. Thanks for sharing this one. Hardrock |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb...maybe I'm having a hormone rush, but I had to revisit this one. "Two nomadic souls that sought to capture vivid memories"...that just sings to me. I'm glad I came back (as I often do with your poems). Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
excellent imagery here. i thoroughly enjoyed this. good work. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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