Dark Poetry #2 |
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All I See |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I try so hard every single day, to make things easy, and to make things go my way. What the Hell, Why do I even try? It's not like if I'm unhappy I'll die. I guess thats who I am, no help for that at all. I can still enjoy a beautiful sunset, if it's masked by clouds, dark and tall. An eternal optimist, thats what I must be, for no matter how much pain or sorrow, goodness is all I see. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Nothing wrong with being an optimist: the expectation of future hapiness is one of the spices of life! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I liked this poem, no harm in looking towards the positive, better than looking at the dark side. "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
loved the poem i always try lookin at the bright side but most often there isnt 1 lol ![]() |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I'm the eternal optimist...despite what I may write. So I really enjoyed this. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, exactly. I'm an optomistic pessimist.. Or is it delusional..? Loved the poem, its true that we generally don't die from unhappiness, so why dwell on it? Except it makes good poetry. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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