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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas 
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The sheet is blank whereon I dreamed With eager hand to pen, The lyrics of a singing heart, Again and then again... Yet on this virgin page is penned No word...still startling clear, On its white surface...glistening there... My story in a tear! |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Wow! I think one more word might have ruind this piece. This is perfict! Bravo Rex!  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I agree with G perfect Rex, you certainly coloured this page. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Rex, superb piece! Tears are a small reminder or very large amounts of emotion. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Another beautiful poem. Perfect description. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Superb Rex!!! Deepak |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Loved this!!! Well done, says alot here, enjoyed very much!!! |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I have to say, I really loved this.... The word choice was great....I adore the last line! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
What can I say? Nothing. You said it all. Hardrock |
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